Wednesday, September 11, 2013
First Blogg
My name is Ayaan Adare, My candidate number is 3061, I'm a student at Swakeleys 6th Form, and have been for the past year. I've chosen Media studies because my friends can't praise it enough, I have been told it is very beneficial plus I will gain skills by choosing the subject. There are no faults to this course, even in lesson times I.e the creativity that is used within the students ideas, they are never boring and coming out of the lessons I will have learnt something interesting.
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A good start; ensure your commas are either changed to full stops, or the word after each comma begins with a letter in lower case.
ReplyDeleteAlso in the final line, 'thats' needs an apostrophe to make it that's as is short for that is.
To appear more formal, try to write the full word instead of abbreviations i.e. I'm = I am.